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Chapter one


“All right, tell me one more time, what is her plan?”

Victor and Anita just flew above the ocean. Doctor Doctor has made an other plan to take over the world.

“Doctor Doctor made a machine which makes people blind.” Professor Professor said.

“Why would she make such a thing?” Victor asked.

“Well, when World Leader is blind, she can’t control the world.” Anita said. “And when that happens, Doctor Doctor can take over the world easily.”

“So it’s up to you to stop Doctor Doctor before it’s too late.” Professor Professor said.

“We’re on it.” Anita and Victor said.

Not much later they arrived at the Head Quarters of T.H.E.M. Anita and Victor landed their sky-bikes near the H.Q. and they sneaked into the base.

“We could hide here.” Anita whispered and Victor nodded.
They hid themselves and watched to Doctor Doctor.

“After today, I will rule the world!” Doctor Doctor shouted and her expendables cheered.

“Like that ever is going to happen.” Victor said quietly.

“Shh, Victor.” Anita whispered, but it was too late. Some of the expendables heard what Victor said and walked to them.
Anita and Victor stood up and started to fight against the expendables.

Doctor Doctor looked to what happened.  “Get them! I won’t let this day ‘saved’ because of them!”
All of the expendables ran to Victor and Anita, who were fighting their way to Doctor Doctor.

“Special Agent Ray, we need back-up!” Anita said

“Back-up is on the way.” Special Agent Ray said and a few seconds later, a team of agents came to help Anita and Victor.

A little fight later, Victor and Anita stood in front of Doctor Doctor.

“So, you two think you could stop me.” Doctor Doctor said.

“We can stop you.” Anita said and she walked to Doctor Doctor.

“I wouldn’t do that if I were you.” Doctor Doctor said. But Anita didn’t listen and walked further. Doctor Doctor pressed the red button and the machine turned to Anita. Anita turned around and before she or Victor could do anything, Anita got hit by a green ray.

“I warned you.” Doctor Doctor said while Anita fell on the floor. Doctor Doctor pushed another button and she disappeared.
I wanted to give it an other try.
So here is my new story about The Secret Show.
Unlike my first story, these chapters won't be really long, but still I hope you'll love it.
And the first chapters maybe sound a little bit weird, but I just had this idea.

Why the story is called like this, will become clear in a few chapters, so be patient.

I don't own The Secret Show and her characters, unfortunely
But I own this story line (I guess)

Eszies-Eszie
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peachykatara Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
This is really good. Is the second chapter uploaded or being worked on?
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
thank you. And yeah, there are more chapters, they are already posted. just follow these links:

chapter 2: [link]
chapter 3: [link]
chapter 4: [link]
chapter 5: [link]
chapter 6: [link]
chapter 7: [link]
chapter 8: [link]
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SangoWings333 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2008
I think it's a great try you did a good job.
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littlepuppyeyes Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2008
me: come on his breed was ment for that
doctor doctor: not if I can help it
me: well shaka
shaka: Well? [link] or [link]
yes no
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HedgeCatDragonix Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OMG!!!
ANITA!!!!
:(
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littlepuppyeyes Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2008
Me: Wait, I have an idea
Shaka: I don't like this
Me: Come on Shaka you'll be a great seeing eye dog
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HedgeCatDragonix Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh noooo... 0_0
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