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Chapter Seven


“What kind of surprise?” Ray asked.

“Well, as you noticed, there are a few different couple pairings which fans like. And most of the time they have something to do with Anita and/or Victor.” Eliza said. “But there are others too.”

“Like what?” Anita asked.

“Well, I got a nice story right here.” Eliza said. “It’s called ‘A Special Agent Life’.”

Ray looked to her. “You mean like in Special Agent?” he asked and Eliza nodded.

Now it was Victor’s turn to laugh. “Well, I can’t wait to know with who would be the lucky woman.”

“It isn’t Anita, I can tell you that.” Eliza said with a smile.

“So, who is it?” Anita asked.

“You’ll see it in a few moments.” and Eliza clicked on the story.

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A Special Agent Life

“Do you want to walk?”

Kowalski looked up and smiled. “Sure, why not?” she said. She looked to Anita, who was sitting in the chair. “Or do I need to help you with something?”

Anita smiled. “No, it’s okay. Everything is almost done. Victor is taking care of the last things.”

“You can help me too, you know.” sounded and Victor gave Anita a kiss on her cheek.

“I’d love to, but you told me that too much work is bad for our baby.”

“I’m a victim of my own phrases.” Victor sighed when Ray and Kowalski walked away, laughing a little bit.



“I really love the winter. I mean everything is so beautiful when it’s covered with snow.”

“That’s the magic of Christmas.” Ray looked to his partner and smiled. They were both walking in the park, which was totally covered by the snow.

“What is it?” Kowalski asked.

“It’s nothing.” Ray said.

“Come on, you can tell me.” Kowalski looked to Ray and gave him a sweet smile.

“I was only thinking.”

“About what?”

“How many Christmas’ did we spend together?”

Kowalski thought for a moment. “Too many to remember the exact count of years.” Kowalski smiled. “I think it’s really nice of Victor and Anita to invite us at their house at Christmas.”

Ray nodded. “Otherwise we would celebrate it alone.”

“That’s true.”

It started as a little tradition between Victor and Anita. They invited each other every year with Christmas, together with Mildred. After a few years, they invited Ray and Kowalski to celebrate it with them. And a few years after that, Victor and Anita came so close to each other, that Victor asked Anita to marry him, on Christmas.

And even now they’re married and while Anita is expecting their first child, they still invited Ray and Kowalski, because it became a tradition.

Ray looked to Kowalski. Every year, he started to love her more and more.
“Kowalski,” Ray said and Kowalski looked to him. “There is something I want to say to you.”

“So, what is it?” Kowalski asked when they stood still.

Ray looked to Kowalski. There were more than a hundred ways to tell her, but he didn’t know which way he had to choose.

“Ray?” Kowalski said softly. “What is it?”

“I love you.” Ray felt a huge relief when he said those words.

Kowalski gave Ray a strange look. “Really?” she asked.

Ray nodded. “Really.” he said.

Kowalski moved her face closer to Ray’s. “I love you too.” she whispered.

Ray smiled and he gave Kowalski a sweet, loving kiss on her lips.


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“That’s what I call a sweet story.” Victor teased, laughing a little bit.

“You can’t be serious.” Ray said while Kowalski looked to him.

“This is unbelievable.” she said.

Anita smiled. “I think it’s a very cute story.” she said.

“Would you two please stop?” Kowalski said, but Victor and Anita started to laugh.

“I’m sorry.” Anita said. “But it’s so nice to hear it.”

“Because it isn’t about you two.” Ray said.

“Exactly.” Victor smiled.

“Cut it out, guys.” Eliza said. “You all have to get use to it. There are enough stories about you guys, so get use to it.”

“You can say it easily, you’re not the one about they’re writing.” Anita said.

“That’s because I have a boyfriend, so I’m not interesting to write about. So, please get over it.”

Anita and Victor looked to each other. “Well, we read some stories, why can’t we read some more?” Anita said.

“Sure, why not.” Ray sighed.

Kowalski smiled. “This could be fun, I know there are more stories about Anita and Victor than any other pairing.”

“Really?” Victor asked. “Are we that interesting?”

Eliza chuckled. “More as a pair, but yeah, you two are really that interesting.”
Finally, it took some time to finish this chapter. I hope you enjoyed it =D I like to write about RayxKowalski and I couldn't resist to put some AnitaxVictor in it! =D

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VictorVoltfan1 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Student Photographer
I can't believe Victor and Anita didn't react so much about them having a baby in the first part. XD Victor could've been like "Whaaaaaaaa............" and maybe happy inside and Anita would be like like " O_o "
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Who knows, maybe when I rewrite it, I might do that :XD: But that won't be the first story I want to rewrite. First will be "I'll be here for you" which is going to be rewrited ;)
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VictorVoltfan1 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Student Photographer
That's cool =)
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HedgeCatDragonix Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Whooo!
Victor and Anita are...
HAVING A BABY?! :O
Wow! :D
Im so happy for them! :)
Btw is the baby Theo?
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
yeah, I think so =D
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SangoWings333 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2008
You did so much justice to the two pairings. ^_^ I have the sudden urge to write an KowalskixRay oneshot.
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
well, I won't be the one who will stop you. ;)I can't wait to read it =D
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SangoWings333 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2008
I can't wait to finish it.
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
me neither =P
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SangoWings333 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2008
It might be a while, but it'll worth it.
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Take your time, girl. I can wait! =P
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SangoWings333 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2008
I almost have ch.1 finished. I have still yet to read your ch.8 now that I skimmed through my daily deviations.

Now I'm really looking forward to that.
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Can't wait to hear what you think :)
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