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Chapter Eleven


“So, what is it called?” Anita asked. She wanted to be prepared for what could be coming.

“Forget me not.” Eliza said.

“That sounds serious.” Victor said.

“It is.” Eliza said. “It really is.”

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Forget me not


“Hi, dad! Bye dad!” sounded and a blond-haired teenager walked in and out the living room.

“Anna, come right back here!” sounded from the living room and the girl went back into the living room. “Where are you going?”

“Come on, dad. Why can’t I just have some fun?”

“As daughter of the commander of U.Z.Z. is it your responsibility that you say where you heading to, so I know where you are.”

“I don’t care.” Anna said and she walked away.

“Anastasia Volt, come back here, right now!” Victor Volt said, but Anna refused to go back in there.

“Hey granny.” Anna said when she walked into the living room of her grandmother.

“Hey, Anna. How are you?” Mildred Volt asked when she came into the living room with some tea and cake.

“Dad and I had another fight again.” Anna said.

“About what?” Mildred asked and she looked to Anna. It was a though day today, for all of them.

“He thinks that I don’t take enough responsibility. Only because he is the commander of U.Z.Z. doesn’t mean that he can say that I don’t take…”

“Listen dear, I don’t care in what way he said it, but he is right. You don’t know which bad-guy wants to capture you.”

Anna sighed. “I know. I know. And that’s even the worst thing. I know he’s right.” Anna looked at her grandmother. “What’s happening with me? Every year, it’s the same thing. I become angry because dad said something.”

“Didn’t your father ever tell you what happened on this day?” Mildred asked.

“No, why? What happened on this day?”

Mildred sighed. She didn’t know if it was smart to tell it, while it was more a thing between father and daughter.

“Grandma, what happened?” Anna asked.

“Something really bad.” suddenly sounded and Victor came into the living room. “I’m sorry, Anna.”

“No, I’m sorry, dad. I didn’t need to react like that.” Anna looked to her father.

“It’s alright.” Victor said. “But if you want to know what happened, you have to come with me to the U.Z.Z. H.Q.”

Anna looked to Mildred. “Do you want to come with us?” she asked and Mildred nodded.

A little bit later, they walked through the dark blue hallways of the U.Z.Z. base.

“So, what’s going on?” Anna asked.

“Sixteen years ago, you were just two years old, something happened which shocked everyone here at U.Z.Z.” Victor said and he walked into a room. In the room were a lot of pictures of a few different people. “In this room are pictures and some stuff from people who died during their work, during a battle.”

Victor grabbed a picture of a blond woman and gave it to Anna. “Who do you think she was?” he asked and Anna looked to the picture.

“I don’t know.” Anna said and Victor grabbed a mirror.

“Look to yourself and to the picture.”

Anna looked a few times to herself in the mirror and to the picture. And suddenly she looked to her father. “That’s a picture of my mother.” she whispered.

Victor nodded. “Anita Volt.” he said. “We were just married for four years and then something like that happened.”

“But, what happened?” Anna asked.

“Sit down, I’ll tell the story.” Victor said. “So it all started sixteen years ago.”

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On a beautiful morning, a cry sounded in a house.

“Shh, daddy is right here.” I said and I grabbed Anna out of her bed. “Was it a bad dream?”

“Hey, is everything alright?” sounded behind me and I turned around.

“I think so, she’s asleep again.” I said to Anita.

Anita smiled. “She’s so wonderful.” she sighed.

I laughed a little bit. “She is our daughter.” I said.

“Are you sure that I should go to work now?” Anita asked. “I mean, it’s just that there was always one of us here with Anna.”

“It’ll be alright, mum is going to watch over her.”

“Well, I didn’t mean that. I meant more that…well, what if something happens to one or maybe both of us?”

“Don’t be so pessimistic.” I said. “It’s just one day. What could go wrong?”

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Victor sighed. “It went terribly wrong.” he said.

“What happened?” Anna asked. She was sitting on the edge of her seat.

“The worst we ever could imagine.”

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“It was really hard this time.” Anita said and I nodded. The reptogators made their way up to the surface, so there was a big fight between the agents and the reptogators.

“But they’re back under the ground, so they won’t harm anybody anymore.” I said and I gave Anita a kiss on her lips.

“Not here.” Anita whispered. We may’ve been married for four years now, but she still didn’t get used to the fluffiness of marriage.

I laughed a little bit. “We’re married, so we can do stuff like this.” I whispered and I gave her another kiss on her lips.

Anita looked to me and she gave me one of her sweetest smiles. “I love you.” she said.

“Love you too.” I said, just when Ray called me. “I’ll be right back.” I said and I walked away. “What’s going on, Ray?”

Just when Ray wanted to say something, a reptogator came back to the surface and grabbed the agent who was standing near the hole.

“Anita!” I screamed, but it was too late. The reptogator threw Anita on the ground. I ran to her as fast as I could. “Anita, stay with me.” I whispered.

“Victor.” Anita whispered. “Take good care of Anna.”

“Anita, don’t go.” I said and I grabbed her hand.

Anita looked to me. “I love you.” she whispered before she closed her eyes.

“I love you too.”

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Mildred felt the tears running down her cheeks. It was such a horrible memory. She could still remember the day that Victor came back home, without Anita.

“Grandma, are you alright?” Anna asked and Mildred nodded.

“I’m fine.” she whispered.

“That day was one of the blackest days of U.Z.Z. history.” Victor said. “Almost every agent knew her, so it was a big shock when they heard the news.”

“How about you, grandma?” Anna asked. “You were with me that day.”

“I’ll tell you.” Mildred said.

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I looked to Anna, who was in a deep sleep. “When you’re awake, your mommy and daddy are back for you again.” I said with a smile. I really love my granddaughter. Anna was so sweet, especially when she was asleep.

“Mum, are you here?” suddenly sounded and I turned around. I didn’t expect them to come home so early.

“I’m upstairs.” I said. “I’m coming down there.” and I walked away from Anna. “So, what’s going on?” I asked when I was in the living room. “And where’s Anita?”

“Maybe you need to sit down.” Victor said and I sat down next to him.

“What’s wrong?” I asked. I felt a terrible feeling inside, because Victor never comes home alone.

“We had a reptogator attack and Anita…” Victor took a deep breath. “Anita passed away a few moments ago.” he said.

“Oh dear.” I whispered. I felt the tears in my eyes and I couldn’t believe it. Anita, the sweetest woman I’ve ever met, the wife of my son and the mother of Anna, dead? “And what about Anna?” I asked.

“She’ll have to grow up without her mother.” Victor whispered. I saw in his eyes that he couldn’t believe it as well. “But it’ll be okay, mum. We only need to be strong for Anna.”

I nodded. That was exactly what I was planning to do.

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Mildred sighed and she wiped her tears away.

“We didn’t want to tell you, because we never knew when it was the right time.” Victor said while he gave his mother a handkerchief.

“But, you could have told me on my eighteenth birthday.” Anna said.

“We didn’t want to spoil your fun, Anna.” Mildred said. “We wanted you to ask us about your mother.”

“But you never did.” Victor said. “So, we figured that we had to tell it on a day like this.”

Anna looked to the picture and felt the tears in her eyes. “The only thing I remember of her is that she had a beautiful voice.”

Victor smiled. “She was the only one who could sing you to sleep. And especially the first weeks without her were really hard. We never heard her voice again. I was getting used to it, to her voice. She always sang when she was home.” he looked to Anna and he hugged her tight. “We’ll never forget her, Anna. She will always live here, in our hearts and in our memories.”

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“Darn it, not again.” Kowalski said when she dried her tears.

“Am I going…What is this for a kind of story?” Anita said. “Why…”

“Remember Victor of the Future?” Eliza asked and Anita nodded.

“Yeah, what…”

“Well, since there was no Anita of the future, some writers decided to write stories like this.”

“You mean that there are more than just one story like this?”

Eliza nodded. “There are not many, but there’s more than one.”

Victor looked to Anita, he didn’t want to see that happen. “I would be glad that that never happens.”

Ray, Kowalski and Eliza nodded.
“Me too.” Anita said. She looked to Eliza. “Is there not a better story, where I not die?”

“I know a very nice story.” Eliza said with a smile.
Okay, I admit, I kinda little bit stole the idea from SangoWings. But I didn't copy it! I swear! I thought about this a long time and I figured that this could be a good way to place it online.

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VictorVoltfan1 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2010  Student Photographer
That is sad:cry: Hav u ever thought that this is why there was no 'Anita of the Future',i mean i thought there was no Anita of the Future cause she was married to(shudders)Alphonse,:bleh:
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Well, seeing no 'Anita of the Future', doesn't have to mean she wouldn't be there.
It was just one of the many ideas that popped up in my head, but I don't think Anita would ever get married to Alphonse. He isn't the one for her
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VictorVoltfan1 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2010  Student Photographer
Ok.Yeah,i don't think so either,but it would be ok if she did right....i mean Alphonse is ok,even though my story don't say it.I think he's a nice guy.
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I dunno. I think Alphonse is the type of guy who is 'married' to his work
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VictorVoltfan1 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2010  Student Photographer
Yeah,that's what i think too.
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
=D Okay :)
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TSSFANGIRL18 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2010   Traditional Artist
everytime I read this...I cry cause it's so sad :cries:
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, :hug:
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TSSFANGIRL18 Featured By Owner May 20, 2009   Traditional Artist
I cannot believe Anita passed
away I am now crying
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner May 20, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Here, take my handkerchief. :hug:
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SangoWings333 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2008
Inspiration I love it, recycling ideas is fun isn't it? =D You bring a lot of ideas in your fanfiction. Things I'd never think of before.
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
yeah, recycling ideas is a lot of fun =D I'm glad you loved it. And I'm glad I give you some ideas. =D
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HedgeCatDragonix Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:'(
Thats so sad!!
Where's Theo btw? ^^;
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Well, Theo grows up with his mum, right?
I thought it would be better to give Anita ad Victor an other kid who can grow up without it's mother.
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HedgeCatDragonix Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well Theo sort of grows up with Victor AND Anita. And his Auntie Kira ;)
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
well, that's why I didn't use Theo, because he grows up with both of his parents (and auntie Kira)
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HedgeCatDragonix Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah! Now I get it lol
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
=D I'm glad you got it =D
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HedgeCatDragonix Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol
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Eszies-Eszie Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:giggle:
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